Directions
- Review your letter to Sonny.
- Identify all comments that apply to your letter.
- Copy and paste the comments that apply to the bottom of your letter.
- Revise your letter to make it amazing!
- When you have finished, please review the Unit Map and begin preparing a study guide.
Sonny Advice Letter Comments
- Organize your multiple ideas into multiple paragraphs (1 main idea per paragraph).
- Watch out for run on sentences.
- How can calculating the percentages spent on each category better convince Sonny to follow your advice? Implement these calculations when necessary.
- How does your recommended control system work? Can you provide a description of what this may look like for Sonny?
- Check your spelling and grammar (sometimes even spell check misses errors).
- You convinced me to review some items in my budget!
- You may want to be nicer to Sonny; its only his first time budgeting.
- Great job! Sonny is lucky to have you!
- With some revision, this will be the best letter of advice ever!
- Feel free to ask for help if you need it. I will gladly meet with you during a Tribe Time to help you with this composition.
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